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“Done packing Linette?”says Mother.

“Yes, mother! I’ll be down in a minute.”

Truth is I’ve been packed for weeks, I cant wait to go to Fifeoraz. My parents are firemasters. In fact most of my family were. But I am a watermaster, which I was grateful for. My parents were the best masters of their class. And I am determined to make that happen for me. That shouldn’t be too hard. I’ve been studying masters since I was 5, even though I just got my masterpower last month. I’m excited to go to this school, and I'm not even nervous.

“Mother? Where did you put my book?”

“On your bed.We got to go, come on!”

I look down at my bed. I may be a little nervous.As I put down my book in my suitcase, I see my letter. I’ve read it a million times. It has my name written in gold lettering on the front and a red stamp sealing it. It's labeled Linette Vanessa Watlins.
As I rush down the stairs, I grab an apple and wash it accidentally using my master power and spraying on mum.

“Oops.Sorry.”
“It’s ok. Now let’s go” she says drying herself. There is a puddle on her dotted blouse now.